After showing our film to Helen, she suggested we re film the ending- it didn't work with the rest of the footage, felt cold
She suggested we break the boundaries of film and have a documentary feel- have the girls talk to the camera at the end
Problem- we still felt unsure if this worked because it felt unnatural and awkward and so will be talking to Helen again to see what she can suggest
Solving- find a new ending, one which flows, we went over the voiceover many times so it sounded more natural
We also re film the start shot which is much more effective and works well with all the elements of the magazine, tablets and hand sanitizer involved
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